Self Reflection 2

I think that most of the issues that I've had in writing Japanese lately have been about the naturalness of the sentences. A lot of the corrections on Lang-8 have completely changed around the sentence structure to make it more Japanese sounding. I'm glad that through Lang-8 I'm starting to focus on this as it will hopefully help make my Japanese more natural and authentic. There are still some issues with using grammar, but I feel that I'm learning how to make sentences that sound more like Japanese than English.